What is the best tagline?
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Please help me with the tagline:
Option 1:
Oasis of the Seas and Allure of the Seas Real Cruise Expert
Option 2:
Book Oasis of the Seas and Allure of the Seas with a Real
Cruise ExpertOption 3:
No. 1 Cruise Expert: Oasis of the Seas and Allure of the
SeasWeb page title:
Oasis of the Seas and Allure of the Seas
http://oasisoftheseasallureoftheseas.com/
Thank you!
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Great! What is your opinion for the title?
Oasis and Allure of the Seas Certified Cruise Expert
It sounds too long?
Thank you for advice!
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That's great! I just wanted to let you know I'd personally be wary of clicking a listing in Google with the word 'expert' in the title. I'd mention certification in the title, personally.
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Thank you Zackary! But I am a real cruise expert with all certificates. I don't know how to promote myself in better way.
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All seem wordy to me.
I personally don't like duplicating a phrase more than once in titles. The SEOmoz suggestion bot does say to include the keyword phrase in the title, but in your case I would shorten it to make sense somehow. Oasis and Allure of The Seas or a variation would have my preference.
In addition I would work in a call to action into the title so users viewing the SERP feel compelled to click your listing. I would focus on discount related words, and also use consultant or planner in place of expert. Anyone that calls themselves an expert automatically trips my BS alarm.
Good luck
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